I have to say, the girl's voice does pale in comparison to other voice actors, and I really think it's the recording's fault. You need either a better audio format (I dunno, it sounded like I could hear where the clip started and cut off, so it definitely needs cleaning up a bit) or a better mic, as Dosko said.
Everything else was just dandy, though. Great work!
It's not got that Madness style...
But it has it's own style, one that's awesome in it's own right. Respect, dude.
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